HALP PLZ?

[astoryandasong]

So I have 5000 ish words of Brendon/Bob that is languishing unfinished. I really, really need some help here - I want to FINISH the darn thing, but I also want to know if it makes any sense at all before I do?

It's a college AU, if that matters. As I said, halp plz?

Comments

[heynderyckx.livejournal.com]

Bwah I'm no good at creating plot or ending or...any of it (oh how I loathe writing), but I think I can swing the "does it make sense" part. No guarantees.

I say wait and see if someone who knows what you're writing about offers, then use me as a last resort. I don't know who these people are so I wouldn't be any good for things like "uh..there's no way in hell Brendan would get Bob a bouquet of buttercups. He knows him too well - he's more of a daisy guy."

[astoryandasong.livejournal.com]

I will bend you to my bandom will....*ahem*

This is Brendon
http://ailleann23.livejournal.com/20049.html

He is generally wonderful and sweet and quite my favourite boy.

and this is Bob
http://marcolette.livejournal.com/40151.html

He is a fucking hot amazing drummer and also a sekrit ninja

They make me all squishy inside for real when I am writing I just stop sometimes and go OH MY HEART YOU PRECIOUS, PRECIOUS BOYS

[heynderyckx.livejournal.com]

Ahh yes Brendon, I remember him. He is very, very pretty. Oh so pretty. And young *evil grin*. I can't be the only one who has this fantasy of deflowering some naive gorgeous teenager, can I?

I'm sure he's an absolute doll IRL but I.CAN'T.STAND.HIS.SINGING.VOICE.

EGADS. *gets out duct tape and handcuffs*

As for the other guy...eh. It's weird, I used to like blondes exclusively, but in the past hmm... 4 years or so I've formed an almost exclusive preference for the tall+dark+handsome types. And skinny, too, hypocritical me.

But yes, to repeat: Brendon is pretty. Let's look at Brendon's pretty together. And sigh.